Meredith, the translation from analog to digital is not working and needs your attention. As you have noted well "I need to figure out how to capture my cups better..." I suggest scanning and a rough digital cut out method (see KCAI.edu).
But, the great news is, I am really appreciating your navigation buttons and title area (big! bold! fun!).
I also concur with your evaluation of the infograph. Yes, it "needs some work". The brown text is conflicting. The infograph needs refining. Rethink the scale of it in the overall page frame, and in relation to the nav area on the left.
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Meredith, the translation from analog to digital is not working and needs your attention. As you have noted well "I need to figure out how to capture my cups better..." I suggest scanning and a rough digital cut out method (see KCAI.edu).
But, the great news is, I am really appreciating your navigation buttons and title area (big! bold! fun!).
I also concur with your evaluation of the infograph. Yes, it "needs some work". The brown text is conflicting. The infograph needs refining. Rethink the scale of it in the overall page frame, and in relation to the nav area on the left.
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