Robe is getting there. Make the following changes by hand and bring in the hand renderings of the other missing objects to class tomorrow.
Try opening up the robe a little more, in order to really nail that white geometric shape "rule". I think the small teardrop shape is not quite enough.
Not sure about the white sleeves. Could you simplify?
Watch the clarity and proportion of the arms, especially towards the shoulders.
Overall the robe is slightly thin, in comparison to the "weight" of your others.
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Robe is getting there. Make the following changes by hand and bring in the hand renderings of the other missing objects to class tomorrow.
Try opening up the robe a little more, in order to really nail that white geometric shape "rule". I think the small teardrop shape is not quite enough.
Not sure about the white sleeves. Could you simplify?
Watch the clarity and proportion of the arms, especially towards the shoulders.
Overall the robe is slightly thin, in comparison to the "weight" of your others.
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